The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the faith and unconditional love this mother showed her son. You did a great job revealing the feelings of the son and the mother.
05/09/05
Good, interesting story!
05/10/05
It's just like a guy to be shopping for Mother's Day cards at the last minute LOL. Loved this entry - smooth flow, great angle on "Mothers."
Blessings, Lynda
05/14/05
I love the way you've got into the mind of Nate and really brought out the great respect he has for his mother. He sure is one super-blessed young man, having a mother like that! I especially enjoy the mental picture of the mother kneeeling in the garden with the pink earplugs and a house full of heavy metal playing young people in holey jeans and probably earrings in their noses and lips, yet the mother totally unphased! A great entry!
05/18/05
This was so creative and you made me love the characters!
I felt like I was watching it....not reading it ! That's GOT to be an art.