The Official Writing Challenge
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This poem has not only perfect meter and rhyme, but excellent personifications for feelings and a wonderful message.
I like the analogy you drew. The meter and rhyme were very good. I enjoyed this, and its message.
This is a great poem with a great message!
You threw this together on a Wednesday night? Wow! Top-notch!
Oh, yes, wonderful characterizations here of the emotions that we all, at times, wrestle against! This poem hits home and does it beautifully!
Excellent - wish I could "throw together" something like this on a Wednesday night. Much to think about.
No embarrassment warrented. Take it back!

I liked the "hike" anger takes us, and how it grows to the point of no return if we don't give it over to the Lord. You told it with clever use of personification. Great job!
simple, good verse use, psychologically consistent…a fine example of excellent writing!