The Official Writing Challenge
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This sad story shows so well the difference Christ makes when he comes into a heart. I like how you used "paid in full."
This really captured my attention. Love the twist at the end. Great message.
I've seen an interview with this American family. It was quite a story. Good story and good writing.
08/14/07
I remember the original story. Loved your perspective on it.
08/14/07
Excellent storytelling - I was absolutely engrossed from beginning to end. I also remember the story - but it didn't detract at all from your amazingly powerful message.
08/16/07
Hi Marilee..

I was touched by your story, and though you had told me a little bit before, it resonated just how terrible that time was for yall.. It was well written, powerful, and left me feeling angry... Glad you entered it... love.. Dianne
08/23/07
Very good story that had me engaged all the way through. The dialogue is realistic and I like the twist at the end.