The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/07
This sad story shows so well the difference Christ makes when he comes into a heart. I like how you used "paid in full."
08/10/07
This really captured my attention. Love the twist at the end. Great message.
08/10/07
I've seen an interview with this American family. It was quite a story. Good story and good writing.
08/14/07
I remember the original story. Loved your perspective on it.
08/14/07
Excellent storytelling - I was absolutely engrossed from beginning to end. I also remember the story - but it didn't detract at all from your amazingly powerful message.
08/16/07
Hi Marilee..

I was touched by your story, and though you had told me a little bit before, it resonated just how terrible that time was for yall.. It was well written, powerful, and left me feeling angry... Glad you entered it... love.. Dianne
08/23/07
Very good story that had me engaged all the way through. The dialogue is realistic and I like the twist at the end.