The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful lesson you presented: forgiveness instead of anger. In the really tough places, only God can see us through. I liked how her worth is God's eyes restored your MC's worth in herself in this well-told story.
08/23/07
You were able to present the MC's disappointment and anger very well in your story. I like the way you ended the story with hope.