The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/07
A well written piece. I didn't realise when reading at the beginning, that I would actually feel sorry for Arthur at the end! Your comment at the end I suppose sums this up. We should really be praying for those who harm us too, even when we feel angry and bitter towards them. We don't know why they react in the way that they do.
08/10/07
Excellent reminder that it isn't just the "beautiful people" that need to be reached with the Gospel. There are so many out there like Arthur and for "heaven's sake" we do need to take the risk and reach out.
08/11/07
You're so right! We MUST try! Nicely done...with a message for all.
08/16/07
Congrats - excellent story. You hit the nail right on the head... I liked how you showed the reasons for Arthur's attitudes. Too often we don't see what's going on behind the masks.
08/16/07
Great story, Gregory! Congratulations on the Highly Commended you received for this entry!
Very believable account of a young, angry man's life. Congrats on your Highly Commended.