The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1075 times
Member Comments
Powerful plot! You've shown great skill!
Wonderfully written - great twist. Had my full attention the whole way through.
Awesome job!
Blessings, Lynda
Nice job and good twist at the end.
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. The set up to the "reveal" was very effective. I liked it alot.
Well written, good twist at the end, loved this phrase..
' car crept up the long gravel laden road. I listened to the loud noise the stones made beneath the tires. It made me think of her heart being crushed each time...' Am wondering tho if the neglecting socialite mother is wearing a bit thin?
A lovely epitaph on the gravestone, too. Well done.
Jo, wonderful entry and the lack of a placing doesn't actually tell the whole story. You actually placed 10th overall, so were just a fraction off the Editors' Choice list. Well done. With love, Deb
An excellent entry, Jo. Boy, you know how to wring a heart out though! Beautiful, descriptive writing.