The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful job of showing the prayers of a mother's heart. So sincere!
As a mother of one married son and three teens, I feel this mother's heart as she prays for her dear ones, not unlike I pray for my own!

You did a wonderful job with this poem. For the future, you might consider spaces between stanzas and inserting some commas to help with flow and clarity of meaning. Blessings, Cheri
I'm sorry - let me correct myself! You did a great job with the commas. The separation of the stanzas would help my brain to comprehend the flow better. Could be just me, but without spaces, it all gets jumbled in my head.

But again, you did a wonderful job! Thanks for sharing! Cheri