The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/07
It's great that you were able to use a personal story to illustrate this week's topic. What profound words from your daughter! A great lesson.
08/10/07
Great lesson, well presented. I hadn't thought it before, but “I am sorry, but...” negates the apology" is a profound truth. Good work.
The lesson you learned from your daughter makes a marvelous devotional.
08/10/07
I hadn't quite thought of it in that light before (to be grateful for correction), but it's a good point. I also agree this would make a nice devotional.
08/11/07
As stated, out of the mouths of babes comes wisdom. This was a learning experience for not only the Mother, but for us all. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Nice job.
08/15/07
The personal story and anlogy were well done. A good read.
I enjoyed your writing style - almost like a journal entry, reflecting upon the day or an event in a person's life and then coming up with a wonderful revelation, a true nugget to be shared.
08/16/07
I love the voice, and the message, and your writing style. You have definitely given me some thoughts to ponder. Great devotional!