The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/07
Can't believe I didn't see that coming! Your dialog is very realistic, and I love that you chose to put this in the present tense. Excellent characterization as well.
I love your realistic dialogue here. I'm glad she's let go of the wrong fellow and has a caring one in the wings.
08/04/07
I really like the ending to your story. I admit to being an unashamed romantic that wants everything to turn out OK for everyone!
08/04/07
Wow... great dialogue and story...So many times to so many people...and finally a lesson is learned and life is never again the same.. I love stories that remind me of this kind of truth..!
This is sooooooooo good! Love it! Romance with truth and a bit of humor and better yet a suprise at the end-all the makings of a well written story! I'd love to see this made into an actual short story and see what happens in this relationship. Keep up the wonderful writing.
This is sooooooooo good! Love it! Romance with truth and a bit of humor and better yet a suprise at the end-all the makings of a well written story! I'd love to see this made into an actual short story and see what happens in this relationship. Keep up the wonderful writing.
This is sooooooooo good! Love it! Romance with truth and a bit of humor and better yet a suprise at the end-all the makings of a well written story! I'd love to see this made into an actual short story and see what happens in this relationship. Keep up the wonderful writing.
This is sooooooooo good! Love it! Romance with truth and a bit of humor and better yet a suprise at the end-all the makings of a well written story! I'd love to see this made into an actual short story and see what happens in this relationship. Keep up the wonderful writing.
05/25/08
Steve, I love this story! I'm ging to feature it on the Front Page showcase for the week of June 9. Look for it on the FW home page, and congratulations!
So glad this was showcased.
I fell right in with your MC's emotions and was there all along. I was hoping....but didn't know.
Happy endings are wonderful.
06/12/08
Congrats on the the FW 500 Showcase author with this wonderful story!
06/15/08
You know, Steve - I had the EXACT same thought I did the first time I read this - can't BELIEVE I didn't see that coming! Wonderful dialogue, wonderful characterization, and a delightful story overall. Definitely worthy of the showcase. Glad I got a chance to read it - and be surprised by the ending - again. :)