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08/03/07
Can't believe I didn't see that coming! Your dialog is very realistic, and I love that you chose to put this in the present tense. Excellent characterization as well.
08/03/07
I love your realistic dialogue here. I'm glad she's let go of the wrong fellow and has a caring one in the wings.
08/04/07
I really like the ending to your story. I admit to being an unashamed romantic that wants everything to turn out OK for everyone!
08/04/07
Wow... great dialogue and story...So many times to so many people...and finally a lesson is learned and life is never again the same.. I love stories that remind me of this kind of truth..!
08/04/07
This is sooooooooo good! Love it! Romance with truth and a bit of humor and better yet a suprise at the end-all the makings of a well written story! I'd love to see this made into an actual short story and see what happens in this relationship. Keep up the wonderful writing.
08/04/07
This is sooooooooo good! Love it! Romance with truth and a bit of humor and better yet a suprise at the end-all the makings of a well written story! I'd love to see this made into an actual short story and see what happens in this relationship. Keep up the wonderful writing.
08/04/07
This is sooooooooo good! Love it! Romance with truth and a bit of humor and better yet a suprise at the end-all the makings of a well written story! I'd love to see this made into an actual short story and see what happens in this relationship. Keep up the wonderful writing.
08/04/07
This is sooooooooo good! Love it! Romance with truth and a bit of humor and better yet a suprise at the end-all the makings of a well written story! I'd love to see this made into an actual short story and see what happens in this relationship. Keep up the wonderful writing.
05/25/08
Steve, I love this story! I'm ging to feature it on the Front Page showcase for the week of June 9. Look for it on the FW home page, and congratulations!
06/09/08
So glad this was showcased.
I fell right in with your MC's emotions and was there all along. I was hoping....but didn't know.
Happy endings are wonderful.
06/12/08
Congrats on the the FW 500 Showcase author with this wonderful story!
06/15/08
You know, Steve - I had the EXACT same thought I did the first time I read this - can't BELIEVE I didn't see that coming! Wonderful dialogue, wonderful characterization, and a delightful story overall. Definitely worthy of the showcase. Glad I got a chance to read it - and be surprised by the ending - again. :)