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08/04/07
Such a heart-wrenching tale in a very short story. You packed a lot into a few sentences. Very good writing.
08/04/07
I agree. This was compelling, so emotional.
08/04/07
You really captured the universal moment of a life-changing event. Anyone, hearing or not, can understand the impact of this medical pronouncement.
This well told story really awakened me to how sad it would be in circumstances like this to be unable to hear for oneself the diagnosis from the doctor.