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08/04/07
Such a heart-wrenching tale in a very short story. You packed a lot into a few sentences. Very good writing.
08/04/07
I agree. This was compelling, so emotional.
08/04/07
You really captured the universal moment of a life-changing event. Anyone, hearing or not, can understand the impact of this medical pronouncement.
08/06/07
This well told story really awakened me to how sad it would be in circumstances like this to be unable to hear for oneself the diagnosis from the doctor.