The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/07
Not sure the theme is complemented in this piece which is filled with detailed description and a predictable twist. The purpose and plot were clear and it was an interesting read.
08/05/07
Yes, quite intriquing entry with a wonderful title. Also, not sure it hits the topic, but well done nonetheless.
08/05/07
A very powerful article. So much atmosphere. I was taken away to the world of your MC. Great job.
08/05/07
Good story and wonderful descriptions!
I thought the description was very good to set the mood in this story, and the description of the MC in the rain was outstanding.
08/07/07
Nice title and good descriptive writing.