The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. This is intense. Really vivid writing and great attention to detail. I liked how in places it all sounded so epic, which I know a situation such as this must feel. I just hope the main character isn't you!! Good luck.
08/06/07
Not a light read, that's for sure; in fact quite deep and takes a good deal of thinking deeply to understand the beauty of what's behind the silence, etc. and I'm one with a rather simplistic mind, but Thanks for sharing this "reluctant morning"...Very creative; and thoughtfully written.
08/06/07
Love your use of oxymoron and metaphor in this dark and moody little piece. Well done!
This is an absolutely beautiful description of despair.
08/06/07
To get that into words....fantastic display of writing.
08/06/07
This is poetic. There is depth and emotion in every line. Wonderfully written.
08/06/07
I instantly recognize this feeling. You captured it all so very well. How I wish no one else in all the world would ever have to have these kinds of mornings, ever again!
08/07/07
Very strong article, heavy with sadness. Powerfully executed language. GREAT job!.
what a lonely thought. ... a true depiction of sadness.
01/18/08
I can tell you've been here.