The Official Writing Challenge
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08/04/07
This is very well written -- and an issue that touches just about everyone. The feeling of inadequacy and paralysis is a common thread among many people.

I especially liked your last line.
08/04/07
Good writing! You were able to convey the sense of despair the MC felt about not being able to use her God given gift.
I love how you used tapestry to describe her writing. This is very well written.
08/06/07
A beautifully written piece.
08/07/07
THIS is a masterful tapestry. Your word choices are wonderful, and you have so captured her angst. Excellent, my friend!
08/08/07
I can truly relate to this piece. I know I have often struggled with the same feelings as Grace, many times on a daily basis. I know many other writers and others alike often feel the same too. Thanks for sharing this!
08/08/07
An excellent piece that I'm sure many writers can relate too -- I know I sure understand some of the feelings Grace was going through!
All I can say is WOW! This is so SAD and powerful and moving. I love it. Thanks for sharing this.
Very interesting take on the topic. I think you captured one woman's sadness wery well. This is well written.
A well written piece. Beautiful. I could feel her sadness and sense her pain.