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How sad for this couple.

The dialogue was well written -- very realistic. Good job with the topic.
I like how you fashioned Kevin to encourage his bride with Scripture.
Very good writing, and a unique story on the topic.
Really sad. I was kind of hoping for a happy ending, such as the family surprising them by showing up at the wedding.

I liked how there was Biblical understanding of marriage woven into the ending.
Strangely enough, I actually know a Katie and Kevin who are engaged--you didn't sneak inside my head, did you? :)

It seems wrong to say that you enjoyed a sad story, so I'll just say I enjoyed the writing, the use of Scripture, and the topic...lovely job!