The Official Writing Challenge
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08/04/07
This is gut-wrenching sad. I am so sorry that anyone should have to endure this type of pain.

Beuatifully written. I felt the pain and uncertainty expressed by the MC.
08/04/07
I do hope this isn't a true story-it's a terrible tragedy for a child if it is! Well written and very powerful entry.