The Official Writing Challenge
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08/04/07
I loved the ending of this.

I was a bit confused about who or what "Do" was, though. Because of the capitalization, I thought you were talking about God, but I wasn't sure.

The meter and rhyme scheme worked well. Great job.
08/07/07
Thanks for sharing your lovely poem about honoring our commitments to our friends, and to the Lord, who can then use us to bless others.