The Official Writing Challenge
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What a pretty piece of writing! This wasn't so sad after all. I enjoyed imagining Blue Spruce and Weeping Willow as real people. Very nice job!
08/03/07
Well, I'm a sucker for any kind of nature stories, so I enjoyed your piece. The personification of the trees was well done.
08/04/07
This is a neat allegory of the way God uses two different people to do His work, in churches, or the mission field.
This is excellent descriptive writing. I liked the analogies to lonely people.
08/07/07
What a lovely story. The sweet sadness is wonderfully crafted around this piece. My only note is not to use so many exclamation marks when making your point. ^_^ Good job. I like weeping willows.