The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/07
Oh, my heart was breaking for the little girl in the story. Great job with characterization! I'm glad this was fictional, but it does make me think about people who really do deal with things like this every day. Great job.
08/04/07
It's interesting how you meshed the physical deformity with the spiritual revelations. A very unusual story!
08/05/07
This is an excellent story. You found an unusual base to build it on and that made it all the more interesting.
This well told story tears at the heartstrings, but I love how you show that God's sweetness can shine through any deformity.
08/06/07
great voice! i liked the concept and the plot; good creative writing.