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08/05/07
I LOVE that you had us travel backward through her life, rather than forward. It was just the right touch. Wonderful descriptions. I have NO idea why this doesn't have more comments. (You might want to put spaces between your paragraphs)
08/05/07
How lovely. The backward look at the album was an interesting touch. Good work.
This is an excellent story told through the the history of the main character's hands. This is outstanding characterization.
08/07/07
This is a beautiful and touching story about a good life. All the ordinary things a loving, God-honoring woman can do in her life is presented here. I also liked the way you went from back to front in the "picture album".