The Official Writing Challenge
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08/04/07
This is very good -- very touching.

"From Satanís grip and Satanís grin." That line really got me. I have never pictured satan grinning when he wins a battle. Chilling imagery.

Great job.
Your poem is a sad commentary on Satan's grip on our youth today. I'm glad it ends on such a happy note of a converted one returning to tell others.
08/07/07
Thanks for sharing this poem about the evil our young people face. The hope you present in the last few lines are the best part of any young person's journey.