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This is very good -- very touching.

"From Satanís grip and Satanís grin." That line really got me. I have never pictured satan grinning when he wins a battle. Chilling imagery.

Great job.
Your poem is a sad commentary on Satan's grip on our youth today. I'm glad it ends on such a happy note of a converted one returning to tell others.
Thanks for sharing this poem about the evil our young people face. The hope you present in the last few lines are the best part of any young person's journey.