The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/07
The lines of this beautiful poem flowed so well--what a great echo of our Father's faithfulness and love through our tough times of doubt and suffering.
08/06/07
This poem is beautifully written. "Just hush, Child," sets the tone perfectly.
08/06/07
Very nice--needs to be set to music, with a soft acoustic guitar playing in the background.
08/07/07
"The sunshine on the earth is cast." That's a lovely word picture! Beautiful writing.
08/08/07
A very well written poem...it flowed very well and never strayed from the original mood set.
08/08/07
Lovely. This would be a nice poem to comfort those who have recently lost loved ones.
08/08/07
Wow! This is so heartfelt! I like the repeating line of "Hush Child" it almost seems to fit as the title instead of "No More To weep" but good job with this, the ryhme and flow-excellent! ^_^
08/08/07
This is beautiful!
08/08/07
Simply beautiful, I could definitely see this set to music. One of my favorites!
08/08/07
What a sweet,comforting poem. It sounds like it should be a lullaby.
08/09/07
This is absolutely STUNNING and lovely in every way. I think my heart is sitting on the table beside me ;) Beautifully constructed and tenderly told. Beautiful.