The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/07
Beautifully written. I can feel the lamb in my arms, and the sadness at her loss.
08/05/07
Some might say, "they're only animals" but those of us who have lost a pet know that they are much more than that. Good work.
08/06/07
Your vivid descriptions make us see clearly the sadness she feels at losing her pet. this is well done.
08/07/07
You perfectly described the loss and sadness that losing a pet can bring. Thanks for sharing your story.
10/18/07
Bonnie, you know how to bring tears to my eyes. I like the way you manage the emotion in your writing. Well done!