The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautifully written. I can feel the lamb in my arms, and the sadness at her loss.
Some might say, "they're only animals" but those of us who have lost a pet know that they are much more than that. Good work.
Your vivid descriptions make us see clearly the sadness she feels at losing her pet. this is well done.
You perfectly described the loss and sadness that losing a pet can bring. Thanks for sharing your story.
Bonnie, you know how to bring tears to my eyes. I like the way you manage the emotion in your writing. Well done!