The Official Writing Challenge
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A good message that sadly, too few take to heart.
08/02/07
This rings SO true. Your descriptions of the MCs thoughts and actions are right on. Much to ponder here.
I like how you illustrated so well the sad condition pointed out in the verse you selected.
This one 'will preach' for sure! Creative take on the topic, and oh, so true. Well done!
08/04/07
"..scratching his chin with the tip of his right wing." What a word picture! I can definitely see the flexible wing tip in that description. Unique and clever story, and a great reminder about giving, and doing it happily!
Serious and important message. You conveyed it very well.