The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/07
A good message, but needs to be spaced out with paragraphing to make it stand out and have a bit more impact on the reader; Thanks for sharing...
This is a good warning for anyone that life is not certain, and death is sure.
08/05/07
I actually felt sympathy for the "grim reaper." Good characterization and good advice too.
08/05/07
Short and to the point. Makes me want to join a gym-almost! Actually, it is a great way to get the reader to pay attention to your message. It caused me to think about my choices in life!