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This was fun! The dialogue was wonderful. This story could keep going, I'd love to read more!
The beginnings of a romance? This would make a good one!
Very entertaining for a sentimental old fool like me.
"There be three things which are too wonderful for me, yea, four which I know not:
......; and the way of a man with a maid."
Prov 30:18,19 (KJV)
Enjoyed the dialog especially! I can definitely relate to Cristina - she's me ALL OVER! Enjoyed the interaction among the characters too.
This is well written and lots of fun. Good job on the dialogue. The characters seemed real. I'd like the hear about their dinner date. It should be a hoot. (I also want to make sure I'm never this clumsy doctor's patient. LOL)
Great dialogue — I can hardly wait to find out what happened.