The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/07
Embarrassing moments always happen in front of the very people you'd least like them to! I enjoyed reading your story, and was able to sympathize with your main character's vertical lack!
07/26/07
Great piece. I think the last anecdote is really about me (a vertically challenged 4th grade teacher).
07/28/07
I can sympathise with the lack of height from a teacherís point of view! It is usually my fourth year boys looking down on me from lofty heights that tell me I need my root touching up!
07/30/07
I was hooked from your first paragraph, and your humor carried the piece all the way through. I also like the summation, with just the right dose of truth and confidence to counterbalance the rest.
07/30/07
Falls...so embarrassing. This is very cute, and well written. too. The last lines tie the whole package up nicely. Well done.
07/30/07
Extremely cute and kept my interest. God bless.
07/31/07
This is cute and enjoyable. Good job!
07/31/07
I loved your humor in this! and the last lines are terrific!! :-) Hugs!!
07/31/07
Love your little anecdotes - enjoyed the conversational tone. Great last line too!
07/31/07
I want to say the anectdotes were funny, but not at your expense as they caused you embarrassment. What a dilemna - what can I say, other than I enjoyed reading your article and getting a glimpse into the world of the "vertically challenged"
07/31/07
This piece had great humor and description! I enjoyed reading it, but felt very sorry for the predicaments of the MC! The ending was wonderful! :)
07/31/07
Great title, great hook, great voice. This was lots of fun to read.