The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/07
Ooh I want to read about the reunion. Excellent buildup, nice story.
07/26/07
Yes, I'd like to see that meeting, too! Your story is very good and a pleasure to read.
07/29/07
Good job. Great reader involvement. Glad you entered. God bless.
From the first of the story I was hoping he would grow up to be successful and marry Sara, so I was thrilled with your ending. I'm always for the underdog.

Good job. This was fun. Your writing is solid.
07/29/07
Love it! High school is a hotbed of cruelty and humiliation, and this is a really well-written story, full of grace.
07/30/07
This was really a fun read. I want to know how they got together. I want to hear about the reunion. What happened to Grey? This is really well written. Nice job with the topic.
07/31/07
So VERY fun - I was very engaged, and I LOVE the surprise at the end! Great stuff.
08/01/07
Great twist at the end. Good job.
08/02/07
Rhonda, this is great! Congratulations on your high commendation. I loved the descriptions and the surprise ending. It made me feel like I was sitting right there in the MC's shoes. Nice job. Blessings, Cheri
08/02/07
Congratulations on your high commended. I really liked this story and am glad to see it placed. Good job.