The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! This is some master level work. You covered all the emotions with embarrassment so well. Amazing!
Very good thoughts and writing here. I like your descriptions very much in this poem.
I love this line:
"With flushing face and stammering tongue I would that I had died"
You have a way with words. Very nice.
Great description. Much to ponder here!
I love the poetic elements here--in particular, internal rhyme and metaphor. This is a master class in verse--well done.
This is an excellent poem. I was just thinking this when you stated it, "You think me of my humility too proud."