The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/07
This is a keeper. This took my breath away. I can't think of a thing I'd change. Amazing.
What a powerful message! God bless you.
07/30/07
Very powerful - and convicting. Excellent.
07/30/07
Beautiful and poignant poem. What a reminder to let Christ rule in our lives!
07/31/07
Very powerful imagery, and a very powerful poem.
You have great comparisons of our lives with our choice--crown or cross. This is an excellent challenging devotional poem.
08/01/07
Wow. I think you've nailed something here that is not easy to put into words. Excellent job, friend! ^_^
08/01/07
Wow! Very vivid message - cuts to the heart of surrender. The poetry flowed beautifully. Well Done!