The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/07
That black ice in the winter can be deadly. It's good that your friend had the presence of mind to ask for help from the Lord; and I'm sure He knew you were frightened out of all thought. :) What an object lesson, however!
07/27/07
Nice story with a useful message. The story was a little telly and needed some of the gray area broke up with paragraphs and dialogue. But you ministered your point well and effectively. A little work on presentation and this would be very good. God bless.
07/29/07
Fright can sometimes block our thinking and what we should do first gets pushed aside. You learned a good lesson there from your friend who put Prayer and Jesus first.
Great reminder that God is important in everything about our lives. Thanks for sharing.
This is a great reminder to pray without ceasing! Thanks for sharing.