The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 533 times
Member Comments
That black ice in the winter can be deadly. It's good that your friend had the presence of mind to ask for help from the Lord; and I'm sure He knew you were frightened out of all thought. :) What an object lesson, however!
Nice story with a useful message. The story was a little telly and needed some of the gray area broke up with paragraphs and dialogue. But you ministered your point well and effectively. A little work on presentation and this would be very good. God bless.
Fright can sometimes block our thinking and what we should do first gets pushed aside. You learned a good lesson there from your friend who put Prayer and Jesus first.
Great reminder that God is important in everything about our lives. Thanks for sharing.
This is a great reminder to pray without ceasing! Thanks for sharing.