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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Embarrassed (07/19/07)

TITLE: Mostly Immune
By Ed VanDeMark
07/20/07


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Mostly Immune

It took over sixty years but I think Iím almost totally immune to embarrassment.

Embarrassment is a lot like a childhood disease. Itís a for sure thing, youíre going to get it but once you do youíre mostly immune.

For years when I read the newspaper about a guy that forged a check, I felt guilty. I had no involvement in this or any other crime but Iím an American and this guy is also an American. Iím somehow responsible for him turning out bad. Oh he lives in North Carolina and I live in New York. Not good enough, New York boarders on Pennsylvania, Pennsylvania boarders Delaware, Delaware boarders on Maryland which boarders on Virginia which in turns boarders on North Carolina. I shouldíve done something to help this guy before things got out of hand.

My teachers said. ďWho wrote those four letter words on the bathroom wall?Ē It didnít matter that Iím a guy, whoíd never been in the ladies room where the words were written. I felt guilty. If the words were misspelled, I felt doubly guilty, because 75 was the highest grade I ever got on a spelling test.

I shouldíve been a Catholic. I spent most of my life on the verge of confessing to virtually everything. If someone mentioned peanut breath I disappeared into an obscure corner and cupped my hands over my mouth and nose and puffed like a wheezing lizard. Iíd walk past a homeless man and stick that same nose under my arm to see if it was me. Then I would feel guilty that Iíd possibly judged this guy unfairly. A pretty girl would walk by and if I noticed her God given attributes, I was positive that the ground was going to open up and swallow me into the pits of Hell. Did I just write the word ďHell?Ē Must be Iím beyond perverse? Jesus please donít have the rapture today, I donít want to go through the tribulation. What would my preacher think? Oh! He wonít be around to notice. Itís just going to be me and all those guilty people. Cool, Iíll find out whoís really religious and who has been faking it all these years. But that would mean; Iím one of the fakersÖhow embarrassing.

I was embarrassed so often people thought red was my natural coloring. I considered telling them ďIím an Indian.Ē Not a good idea, my blue eyes would give me away and that would be one more embarrassing thing on Judgment Day.

Over the course of time, endless, endless, seemingly endless years, I accused myself of almost all the possible crimes against God, mankind, the whales and political correctness. Iím finally immune to virtually every form of embarrassment that exists on this planet. I no longer misspell words. I create new words with similar spellings and meanings to existing words. I eat peanuts with reckless abandon and I believe God is an exceptional artist. He gave us majestic purple mountains, amber waves of grain and the fruited plain. He gave Eve to Adam and Adam to Eve and like all great artists I believe he wants us to pause to appreciate all of his phenomenal handiwork. While Iím free, free at last I must admit I still carry a roll of breath mints and check to see if my wifeís approving of my level of appreciation for Godís artistry. But now that Iím mostly immune, a silly little grin has replaced my red complexion.


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Dee Yoder 07/26/07
I knew someone just like your main character (or you, if it's autobiographical!). He told me once that he just knew, as he climbed the ladder to heaven, God was adding rungs to the top! He's in heaven now, and I'm sure every one of his self-imposed guilt trips have vanished into perfect peace! God's grace is so awesome and a grand gift, indeed. Thanks for a great story!
william price07/27/07
Kool! I liked this entry. A little work on presentation and this would be even better. Keep up the blessed work. God bless.
Gregory Kane07/29/07
There were some lovely turns of expression in this piece. I enjoyed the almost frantic deliberations about the Rapture and the assumption that your preacher doesnít suffer from the same human frailty! Isnít that typical of how some Christians put on a sanctified veneer that belies the inner battle with their sinful natures.
Kristen Hester07/31/07
Good job. Perhaps it is the years and years of my own embarrassment that have also made me "mostly immune." Thanks for sharing this.
Lynda Schultz 07/31/07
Creative spelling, eh? That must have been what you were doing when you wrote "boarders" instead of "borders," right? Good job though.