The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/07
A great reminder of what is REALLY important. Enjoyed this!
07/23/07
The dialog is so easy going and natural. It was a pleasure to read this lovely story!
I enjoyed the garden party with its strong sense of family and neighbors and "happy" ending.
07/25/07
Awesome example of neighborly love. I think there is a change of name near the end. Great job.
07/25/07
LOL - yeah - I did change the character name and missed that one - good eye!
07/25/07
What a lovely surprise! Nothing can let you know how much people care than when they unexpectedly pop in and help you when you're way deeper into something else. Nice job. I found a typo though and the ending was a little confusing, Mark and Tom are the same person, right?
Such a sweet story of people reaching out to help one another in a time of need. Great writing!
This is what loving your neighbor is all about. It's actions, not words, just as you've written here. I enjoyed this.
This is a very sweet story. If something like that happended to me, I would be very HAPPY for the help. Thanks for reminding us that God often uses what seems like a bad situaion to bless us.
07/25/07
A sweet, simple story, that I just fell into. Good job of "showing" us about the tornado, not telling in the beginning. Your writing style is very comfortable. I enjoyed this!