The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/05
God is so good! He gives these special gifts...like gathering family members together...He cares for us deeply. Thanks for sharing!
Oh, how the line..."her life work was to hold the family together..." charmed my heart. Beautiful job!
Very nice! Good use of fore-shadowing, direct quotes and visual imagery! God was in attendance at those fateful get-togethers!
05/09/05
I felt a part of your family's gathering. Anyone who has lost a loved one can relate to the last memories and the bitter sweet mental pictures.
Thanks for sharing, this remind us to celebrate each and every day with our love ones as special. for no one knows the time or the hour except the Lord. be blessed to day and always.
05/13/05
A great role model of a mother!
05/14/05
You've painted a lovely picture here.