The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/07
They say that, with kids, love is spelled T-I-M-E. You've definitely showed that here! Some of the grammatical and punctuation issues were a bit distracting, but I enjoyed this piece nonetheless!
07/23/07
Looks like Mom got to Dad, and Dad got the message. Good one. A little polishing here and there, but otherwise well done.