The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/07
Liked this and the message throughout that how we live is what people will remember when we die. More than that, what will our Savior say. Good job.
I enjoyed your story. There is so much reward to be gained in taking the risk to do what others are scared to take on. A great gift to have the power to move others with your words. Good work!
This is such a great message. Thank you for sharing this. What a blessing.

Your writing is solid and flows well, as always. I loved your line:
“live good, and I’ll tell good; don’t, and I won’t." That's great!
07/30/07
Great message in this well written piece. What WILL I leave my Eulogy Writer? I thought from "Pick out Mom's outfit" that it was mom's funeral she was preparing for, but that little hiccup didn't deter from the great story. Thanks for sharing this revelation!