The Official Writing Challenge
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You managed to get an entire sermon into 750 words! You could teach lots of pastors how to whittle down their sermons :) Very inspirational. Thanks, Angel
07/22/07
Very convicting article! I love this: ...sooner or later, leaks form in the patch we used to cover the hole in our heart. and: It is not a temporary patch…it is a forever fix. . The two metaphors were great - the forever patch on the hole in our hearts, and filling the hole in our hearts, but I thought they could have been tied together better, or one segueing into the other. To me, you seemed to go back and forth.

You've written a very intelligent, inspirational article, and even quoted a verse I was searching for just tonight! Thank you for the blessing. :)