The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/07
Oh, I could smell the rain as it soaked the fields! Great job. Loved the ending... especially the line "I guess the Lord said we could!"
Kate~
07/21/07
I apprepciate your story telling ability. The descriptions are original and highly effective.

It carried me, and involved me completely. A smoothly, confidently written account, which maintains a confident standard of writing and a certain tension to a most satisfactory ending.

Well done.
07/23/07
Engaging story. I could feel it and see it — and that's all good stuff.
Excellent job with descriptions and pulling your read into the story...loved the happy ending. Great job storytelling.
...your reader into the story.
07/25/07
This is an amazingly visual piece - your descriptions were excellent. Loved this.