The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/07
Such atmosphere! I love how masterfully you showed your MC's heart. This is wonderful.
This is an absolutely beautiful story. You made us long with our main character for a happy ending, and the ending was perfect.
07/21/07
You made me see the stigma your MC felt she carried as an orphan - and her faith in God. I enjoy this genre, and I think this is an exceptional example. Thanks!
07/21/07
Oh, a romance! I like your main character very much. Your story would make a fine beginning to a really good book.
07/22/07
Loved reading your unfolding story! I felt the longing, torment, and joy of your main character leap off the page. Good work!
I see the start of a love story in novel form. Each of your main characters were sympathetic had just enough mystery and depth to them to make the reader care and want to know more. The story itself leads to some great expectations. It leads the reader to ask, what adventures lay ahead.
07/24/07
I loved the way you began with the hesitancy we all feel as writers to write just the right thing the right way. I was sympathetic with her immediately... and great ending to a new beginning
07/25/07
I really enjoyed what you've written. I'd love to read this in book form too.
Beautiful story. This could be a book. Loved it.
Lovely story! I especially liked the ending and the picture of her smile breaking through the clouds...
Oh, I have chills. I am such a romantic and I love historical fiction. This is right up my alley. Great!
Hooray for you!!! Again!!
07/26/07
What a beautiful story, Mid! I loved the ending, I was really hoping it would turn out well for her. Great writing...and Congrats on your 'win'! ^_^
Your placement is great to see, Mid. Congratulations on your well-written (and might I say) potentially evolving novella : )
07/26/07
Congratulations on the EC. This is a beautiful story. I love the easy flow of your writing. Great job.