The Official Writing Challenge
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You've got some great detail in here - I very much enjoyed this rendition of a familiar Bible story - a great one for this topic.
Who could be happier than prisoners who have been suddenly, and inexplicably set free? Good story based on this familiar scripture passage.
I always enjoy a behind-the-scenes look at Bible stories. This was an enjoyable read, and I like the "today" dialogue you gave Paul and Silas.
"No matter what, he could find joy in Christ." This sentence in your story is a wonderful message. You gave us a good snapshot of Silas.
Another great bible story retold! I like this. You bring the story alive and you kept this reader reading all the way through. Good job! ^_^
You made this familiar story in the Bible come alive. I loved seeing Silas and Paul's personality and their relationship. Excellent.