The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/07
wow, the pull of telling the truth when one becomes a Christian. I especially like the line: "But He is truth and I have to honor Him." You gave the characters life and feeling. Nicely done.
07/23/07
I felt as if you ran out of time at the end because of the word limitation and weren't able to put more meat on the bones of this story. It's a powerful one and well-written. I hope you get the opportunity to expand it when you don't have a word limit.