The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/07
Is this a true story? Nicely done.
07/23/07
Oh, your main character has the loveliest personality. I thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end! I also wondered if it was a true story. (It's nice to think such giving people exist in real life!)
07/23/07
A wonderful story. And so much truth to it. Very well written.
07/23/07
Lovely story... It is amazing how God created us so that our emotions can be stirred so easily by music...
07/23/07
I loved the personality of your main character. She seemed quite real--you maybe?
07/23/07
I agree about the MC's personality - and voice! This was just a delightful read and a wonderful story.
07/25/07
Your MC is great! I liked the contrast here between the cousins. You had a slight/mary/martha vibe going on here. I liked it. Good job. I'm glad Aunt Ingrid was all right after all too. ^_^
07/25/07
I love the personality of your main character -- what a lovely person. This is very well written. Realistic dialogue and descriptions. Great job.
07/25/07
This is a great story. Your writing is solid. I liked the ending. The MC wanted her aunt to be happy. Very nice.
07/25/07
Very enjoyable. I liked how you wove it all together and especially liked the ending.