The Official Writing Challenge
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Ha! I had to laugh with this one and empathize with the girls. I know too many of us had plenty of Travis's of our own to deal with through life. Too funny-Loved the ending. Keep up the great writing. Janice
Funny story, and although it's never happened in public, I've almost suffered Travis' fate. So I'm a little sympathetic, although her clearly deserved his comeuppance.
Fun story - I also felt sorry for Travis, but I'm a softie. Great job with characterization.
I like fun writing and enjoyed this one. but girls who like revenge are as bad as bad boys. thanks
Travis didn't seem to be too upset about his embarrassing incident! I don't think a guy like him will be down for long. Funny story, and it entertained me from beginning to end!
This was a delight to read. Great job with dialogue.
Very Funny! I've met a few of these type people in my lifetime.
Too cute! Hope he learned his lesson. Enjoyed the humor and dialogue. Great writing. Felt I was part of the class observing it all.