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07/19/07
Interesting and thought provoking. I was confused - was Elizabeth in a car or a truck? This article should make us remember Job, too - look what he lost, then gained back.
07/20/07
This is a good story but it's a dark story. While I usually prefer stories with happy endings we all need an occasional reminder from the other side of reality. While sermons that focus on love are generally the way to go, a periodic fire and brimstone sermon is good for the soul. This is exceptionally well written. Thank you.
07/21/07
How many Evas are there out there, with crippled lives because they tried to fill shoes that weren't made for them. A sad story, but a meaningful and appropriate message. Good work.
07/22/07
Wow. This is very good and powerful.

Just a few comments: I think you might have written Anna where you mean Elizabeth at the bottom. I'm not sure. Also, there are a few places where some quotation marks might be helpful.

This is a great story! Good job.