The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, like a summer day just opened up on my computer screen. I very much enjoyed reading this story. Refreshing as the summer storm you described so well!
This is a feast:

of images, of steady strong writing, of senses, of emotions and beautifully descriptive. I am completely captured by it, and dont want to leave either!

It's sensational!
Wonderful description — I felt like I was right there —or I certainly wish I was! Good work.
Nice word picture. Good job and good descriptions.