The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/07
Uncle Roy sounds like quite a guy, and I love how you gleaned such an important lesson from him. Breaking up some of your paragraphs, as well as spacing them, might make this a little easier to read. A great reminder.
Uncle Roy sounds great. I agree that breaking up the paragraphs would help. I'd like a more detailed description of the reunion and the people that were there. Sounds like fun, happy people.