The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/07
Your title drew me right to your poem! And thank our good Lord we won't have to deal with slum lords in heaven. I've had my share in the younger years, instead of the other way around!
07/21/07
Hilarious!
This is a sad reminder of yet another of the ills of our society. But I like the poem--it was well-written and clever.
07/22/07
Clever and a little tongue-in-cheek humor mixed with a message. Thanks.
Wow, what a twist. This wasn't what I expected. I like it a lot. Nice job.
The rhyme scheme works quite well. However, I kept searching for some other poetic devices such as; alliteration, metaphor, simile, enjambment and possibly slant rhyme along with your perfect rhyme. The devices help to take away the monotomy of the rhythm. Good job, keep writing
08/20/07
Once again I've been honored with an invitation into the elite Puppy Pen by the Great Professor himself. Thanks for your support, Dub, so "Happy", and such an honor!