The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/07
This was nicely written, but I have no idea what "choke up" means. Perhaps a brief explanation would have helped those uninformed people like me.
This is a very sweet story. I enjoyed it!
07/20/07
What a lovely, inspiring story! The main character is so appealing and humble. I really like this one.
07/26/07
This is a different slant on sports success and I enjoyed it.