The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this sweet poem made me happy. It would make a beautiful children's book. Nice job.
07/19/07
Delightful,with a marvelous message.
07/19/07
Cute, happy, cheerful! I agree it would be wonderful for a children's book. I enjoyed reading your poem.
07/21/07
Ditto — I could picture the illustrations in my head as I read (Ohhh, that rhymes - must be your influence!)
This poem says a lot and shows a lot of wisdom. So many good comments, like the Proverbs. Such as we should all get along.

Good job on this one. God Bless