The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/07
Wow, this is really good!
Beautiful...
07/12/07
Oh my. I'd like to send this to my nephew who has to "process" the fallen soldiers in Iraq. Just this week, he has experienced pain like this. Your poem is beautiful.
07/12/07
Wow - great images here - well done!
07/14/07
"Confidant" was there, but I guess I overlooked the topic word of confident amongst the beautiful, heartfelt words. Nicely done!
Beautiful poem! I believe you did a wonderful job of showing, rather than talking about, confidence.
07/17/07
Just beautiful. Very moving and lovely.
07/17/07
Oh I just love this. Everything a poem should be. Very well done!
07/17/07
This poetry not only proclaims confident assurance, but heart and hope as well as encouragement. I get a sense of real "meat" in your words, something tough to chew on for awhile, but full of nourishment for one's soul. I am impressed.
Very nice!
A poem meant to be set to music. Good allegories and great message.
This very visual poem presents a most challenging message.
07/18/07
Wow. I could see him and feel him. Well done!
07/18/07
Wow! This is 'beyond' nice. It's wonderful. So much packed into it. Descriptions were more as emotions that tied everything together. Good job!