The Official Writing Challenge
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07/12/07
Beautiful!
07/12/07
Oh my goodness, you made me cry. I have a Dad with Alzheimer's and I can imagine just this kind of scene. And yes, sometimes I am sure he can see right into heaven! This is a wonderful story and very soothing to my heart. Thanks for being a good writing servant for the Lord!
07/13/07
This story touched me too - as my dad is now suffering from Alzheimer's. Your descriptions were perfect and great dialogue. I love some of your expressions and I could see the scene before me. Very good writing!
07/14/07
Oh yes! That is the confidence of all believers. I could see it all, and feel it — nice work.
What a touching story, excellently written
07/17/07
Amazingly powerful and wonderful. Wow is right!
What a sweet, touching story.